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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2020 02:49 pm Title: In a New York Minute

Is *squee* still an appropriate review?

I’m glad I’m reading this with Chapter Five just one click away, I’ll tell you that much.

Reviewer: BecauseOfYou Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 16, 2016 06:53 pm Title: In a New York Minute

And this is where I squee!

This chapter I found interesting in a different way. It had a lot more business and technical speak, something that I've just never been a part of it so I found it to be very interesting. But I also kind a got the feeling you might be foreshadowing a little bit of a Pam/Danny situation which makes me positively giddy. Especially since it'll be mostly one-sided, and if anything it'll only be because Jim has Karen. And of course that'll cause fun tension with Jim and his feelings for Pam.
I thought it was absolutely hilarious how you mentioned that there was a history with Alex and Pam but it was OK now because Alex was married now.

The part where Pam wondered if she had put up a fight in one particular case… So sad. But adding all that stuff in there adds so much more depth to the story.

And in the end when she finally sees Jim again, her slow shot reaction, I could visualize it so easily.

Reviewer: missfand0m Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 26, 2016 11:09 pm Title: In a New York Minute

HA I knew it would happen something like this ;)

Author's Response: ;-)

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