Date: October 22, 2017 08:45 am Title: Season One
So glad to have checked back and saw that you finished this. You're so insightful. From a writer's perspective, I actually think this is a really helpful tool to get inside Jim's head :)
Date: August 29, 2017 06:19 pm Title: Season One
Great story! Really, really awesome storytelling from Jim's point of view in here.
1 [Report This]Date: August 17, 2017 03:13 am Title: Season One
Still loving it, thank you for writing!!
1 [Report This]Date: August 05, 2017 08:12 am Title: Season One
Thanks for posting here, love this 1st chapter. I think you capture the Jim-Pam-Roy dynamic well, I'm sure Jim had a lot of internal struggle wanting to only think of Roy as The Worst (tm) but also having to accept that Pam did love Roy.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I know a lot of people think Jim is like a "self-proclaimed nice guy" who was kind of a jerk for wanting to break up Pam and Roy, so I was really trying to express the fact that it wasn't quite that simple!!