1 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2018 10:56 am Title: The Parking Lot
This was so great! Really looking forward to more from you.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks!
1 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2017 08:27 pm Title: The Parking Lot
I'm definitely enjoying this. I'd agree with Becauseofyou that the pacing here suggests a longish story word-wise so an outline would be a good idea. I'm intrigued by how actually meeting her parents will go--what do they think of Roy? Of him? Of her?
And is your Pam an "I need time" Pam or an "I've had time" Pam when the chips are down?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and your suggestions!
I'll definitely get to work on an outline. This is my first time writing fanfiction and so there's a bit of a learning curve.
I'll think about how Pam's parents think of Roy/Jim and maybe revisit a real meeting between Jim and her parents.
I think my Pam might be a nice mix of the "I need time" Pam and the "I've had time" Pam, but we'll see. Thanks again, and stay tuned! :)
Date: October 14, 2017 09:09 pm Title: The Parking Lot
Wish I had more jelly beans. Loving every chapter! Your story rings so true -- can't wait! :)
Author's Response: Thanks, I promise more is coming!
Date: October 03, 2017 10:15 pm Title: The Parking Lot
Having a hard time waiting . . . . Love this!
Author's Response: Thanks for the support! I've been having some major writer's block, but I'm going to keep on keeping on :)
Date: September 05, 2017 02:39 pm Title: The Parking Lot
I am SO enjoying the fruits of your obsession. Holding my breath . . . . keep 'em coming! :)
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! I definitely plan to! I'm just trying to work out how Pam would realistically deal with the situations I'm putting her through. a86;
Date: August 30, 2017 10:20 am Title: The Parking Lot
Right I'm down for this fic! I'm reading this on my phone and I have to say, the way you've formatted and set out the text and speech is so clear, so bravo!
Although this chapter is obviously setup and dialogue from the show, your additions are still a wonderful addition and seem to me to be very true to the character of Jim. Well done for posting your first fic, and I'm looking forward to more! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm honestly shocked and flattered that people are reading my story at all. Your words are MUCH appreciated. I'm very excited to keep writing :)