1 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2019 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 5
So, my heart hurts even more. Who can we write at which TV chain to make this happen in a movie or something? Seriously.
1 [Report This]Date: March 12, 2018 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh, that was adorable and so heart-wrenching at the same time. On my first read through, really late last night, I actually teared up a bit when jim did and that’s really unusual for me. But he was given a bit of hope to cling to and clearly the connection is still there, she still feels a strong pull to him, now she just needs to figure out why.
1 [Report This]Date: March 12, 2018 06:47 am Title: Chapter 5
Okay that managed to be both adorable and in tune with the rest of your traumatic brain injury concept. Bravo.
1 [Report This]Date: March 12, 2018 06:38 am Title: Chapter 5
Ugh so sweet and heartbreaking and I just can’t wait to see what happens next. I loved their dialogue; I loved the way her body and her subconscious knows that she wants to talk to Jim and make him laugh, even if she doesn’t remember who he is. Can’t wait to read more!