1 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2020 10:09 am Title: Chapter 10
"I tried to write an entire chapter of this story without someone crying. I'm moderately proud of myself in my success." You in fact did not succeed because here I am crying. I feel like Jim rn, frustrated that I can't do anything about this. I love the moments where things start to come back to her, they break my heart and make me smile at the same time.
Date: June 25, 2018 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 10
Excellent writing! I've got a feeling something big is about to happen. It's like the real Pam, is still there trying to break through, and she's almost there. Hopefully soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! Something big is definitely looming... ;)
1 [Report This]Date: June 25, 2018 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 10
You did such a great job with making the dialogue seem real and from those characters. Jim was spot on. I'm so excited to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you! It's always important to me to keep them in character so it's nice to see that it's working :)
Date: June 24, 2018 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oooh I loved the call back to Booze Cruise and the 27 seconds. So good. I also REALLY loved the whole Halpert/Beesly breakfast scene, I thought it was so sweet. I’m really really interested to see how Roy being more present complicates things! Can’t wait.
Author's Response:
Oh trust me, he's going to complicate things.. ;)
Thank you!
1 [Report This]Date: June 24, 2018 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 10
Roy kicked rocks!
I don’t like this whole ‘Roy suddenly has a conscience and is going to behave’ nonsense but I’m going along with it because I trust you.
That being said, come on Pam’s memories - they’re so close! Poor Jim. And poor Penny - I keep waiting and hoping she gets fed up and spills the beans but it’s fine, I’m enjoying the teasing and the familiarity and come on Pam... look how your family is around Jim... don’t fall for Roy’s sudden appearance. Daisies don’t make up for that tacky apron.
Lol, I really do love this story!
Author's Response:
He did! :)
He has a conscience for a specific reason, just hold on, lol. Thanks, darlin'!
Date: June 24, 2018 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
How did you manage to make Roy WORSE? In that I find him more of a threat and a blocking character, not in that he's actually a worse person. Except for the cheating. That does make him a worse person. C'mon Pam's memories, give us a break from this guy ;)
Author's Response: Ahhh, that would stem from my pure, inherent hatred of Roy Anderson that's been culminating since I was a teenager ;) Don't worry, the memories will happen all in good time :)