Date: July 04, 2018 10:30 pm Title: Farming and Walruses
I’m loving this story. I really hope you continue writing soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm posting the next chapter soon!
Date: July 01, 2018 11:29 am Title: Farming and Walruses
Aw! This was so cute. The text at the end was adorable. You wrote them all really well and in character, too, I could easily picture the entire chapter. I can’t wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you're liking it!
Date: June 29, 2018 07:26 pm Title: Farming and Walruses
I can’t wait to see where you go with this!!!!
Date: June 29, 2018 01:57 am Title: Farming and Walruses
I didn't expect to, but I absolutely love this!
Author's Response: Yay, I'm happy to hear that!
Date: June 28, 2018 12:17 pm Title: Farming and Walruses
D'awww.
Date: June 28, 2018 12:10 pm Title: Farming and Walruses
It must be exhausting having Kelly for a roommate! Except for when she invites cute boys over, that is.
This was fun to read! I always like a good AU and that text at the end was super adorable. Can’t wait to read more 😊
Author's Response: I know, right? But I thought it would be fun to write for Kelly, and it is! I'm really glad you're already enjoying this. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: June 28, 2018 12:00 pm Title: Farming and Walruses
I’m in need of more “Jim and Pam meet when they’re younger stories.” Great start! I loved the little text at the end. So cute!
Author's Response: Thank you! I was a little scared to be writing an AU like this, but this is super reassuring :)
Date: June 28, 2018 11:58 am Title: Farming and Walruses
Very cute. Lots of fun playful banter between everyone here. There was only one thing that was kind of distracting. The "(read: literally make out)" part when everyone is leaving the dorm. If that's what you're trying to get across, then just say that. Like I said it was a little distracting, for me, to read it like that.
Otherwise, very fun. Keep going with this.
Author's Response: Well first off, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Second, thanks for pointing that out! I went back and read it myself after I saw your review and I can totally see what you mean. I'll make sure to be more careful moving forward. Thanks!