Date: July 11, 2018 12:10 pm Title: Boyfriends and French Onion Chips
Hope you continue this story so! Look forward to the following chapters
Date: July 05, 2018 08:33 pm Title: Boyfriends and French Onion Chips
I LOVE the line about Pam and Roy being held together by string, duct tape and obligation. Stupid Roy.
I also really liked the guys bonding over alcohol and their trying to help Jim with what to do - you don't see that a lot and it was definitely a nice touch!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
1 [Report This]Date: July 05, 2018 03:02 pm Title: Boyfriends and French Onion Chips
Dumb old Roy, always keeping them apart when they’re obviously meant to be together! But conflict is important and I’m looking forward to where you take it. Also, I can’t WAIT to read about the Halloween party! Loving this so far, can’t wait for more!
1 [Report This]Date: July 05, 2018 02:22 pm Title: Boyfriends and French Onion Chips
Oh, this is good. I think you're hitting the right notes with lovesick college students (at least, the ones I've taught seem much like this). I eagerly await more.
1 [Report This]Date: July 05, 2018 02:10 pm Title: Boyfriends and French Onion Chips
A great way to introduce the Roy troubles! Interesting to think that they’ve been spending their break in such contrasting ways. I can’t wait to see how it plays out!