1 [Report This]Date: November 25, 2018 08:39 am Title: the trip
Welcome to MTT! This story was very sweet and a lot of fun. I like the very realistic situations you’ve integrated into this story, like Helene drunk dialing Pam and feeling lonely. I think pretty much every family ends up having to choose between one side or another at some point, so it was a nice (and sad) touch to ground the story. Looking forward to the next chapter!
1 [Report This]Date: November 23, 2018 07:02 pm Title: the trip
Oh I like where this is going! Poor Pam, that drive to Philadelphia sounds like a nightmare but I think your version of Cece is just adorable. She’s a daddy’s girl, and who can blame her?
I can’t wait to see what happens when everyone wakes up! :)
1 [Report This]Date: November 23, 2018 06:30 pm Title: the trip
Congratulations on your first Office fic! Welcome!
This was so sweet. Poor Pam! I do think her family probably has a little more drama than Jim's (I think this has a lot to do with some of the things we saw from her in canon. I look forward to where you are taking this story. Holiday fics are so fun!
1 [Report This]Date: November 23, 2018 06:04 pm Title: the trip
Good start to a heartwarming story. Cece acting and Helene drunk calling provided depth to it. I've said before one of the reasons I feel Jim and Pam resonate so well is that it's easy to see them as a real couple. You pulled that off with this chapter. Looking forward to reading more.