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Reviewer: Coley Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2019 05:02 pm Title: Battering Ram

"wearing the dead bodies of its friends" got me good. So great!

*spots tree sap, grins knowingly*

Glad that Jim made it back to the office, and that it's Ugly Sweater Party day! Maybe Pam can stop hitting her head against the desk now.

Author's Response: *Grins* That one was a lot of fun to incorporate...

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29, 2018 08:52 pm Title: Battering Ram

So many fun details, from Pam (And Phyllis ( enjoying the view, to the tree sap-induced prom pose, to the fallen friends... very clever and very compelling. I’m excited to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you! The tree sap was fun to incorporate (it came from my Secret Santa recipe).

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 26, 2018 04:53 pm Title: Battering Ram

Very cute here. I love how you've got Jim so easily making Pam happy. Onto the next.

Author's Response: Appreciate the feedback! The S2 Jim/Pam dynamic is probably my favorite in the whole series.

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