1 [Report This]Date: January 06, 2019 05:37 pm Title: So Call Me, Maybe
This chapter. It's SO GOOD. It says so much, and I'm feeling sad for Pam all over again. That first paragraph was so well done.
Not even mad Michael won the contest. *shrugs* AND I really laughed out loud at the paper ream prank. That's gold.
Stupid Roy. Stupid Kenny. They deserve each other.
Listen, I've watched a lot of Hallmark movies... Jim's going to be there skating right? He's totally going to be there skating.
Author's Response: I'm glad someone else is genre savvy in this genre--I strongly considered the possibility that Jim would be there. But I'm even more glad I tricked you...
Date: December 29, 2018 09:06 pm Title: So Call Me, Maybe
Ugh. Roy.
Another well-crafted chapter. His prattling and her silence becoming more and more tense... nicely done.
Author's Response: Thank you! Phone calls are interesting to do in text form.
Date: December 26, 2018 05:04 pm Title: So Call Me, Maybe
Awww Pam, to be stuck cleaning up after everyone, being sad about being alone, then Roy calling to further remind her of that and not even letting her get a word in edgewise. Great writing though to convey all those emotions.
Author's Response: Thank you! I value your opinion on my writing of emotions because your own is so good.