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Reviewer: Coley Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2019 06:00 pm Title: Paint by Numbers

I wish you could have seen my face when I read the line where Roy called Pam petty. I was cheering pretty hard when she told him he was over it. Finally!

Hmm... who's hand could that be in the picture with her? I wonder.

Author's Response:

Who knows! It's a mystery.

 Thanks for noticing these small touches. 

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 29, 2018 09:20 pm Title: Paint by Numbers

You go, Pam! I love imagining Pam showing that spirit on her own, and sooner. Also, I wanted to mention the little verses as chapter descriptions— too cute!

Author's Response: Thank you! The verses were fun to do. And yeah, there is a certain amount of wish-fulfillment of Pam getting there herself earlier.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26, 2018 05:15 pm Title: Paint by Numbers

Very intense chapter here. I do like how Pam finally told off Roy like this. Good for her. I also like how you described Pam's painting. Very vivid considering all the stress she's been under. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks! I wish we'd seen more of Pam's art in the series, so I try to incorporate it where I can.

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