Date: November 29, 2020 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 13: Corridor
This was just a really sweet scene.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks :)
Date: April 04, 2019 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 13: Corridor
Pam bouncing over to Jim is the cutest thing ever. I love how happy she is here and I love poor clueless Jim just going along with it, letting her hang out in his arms, and just letting it all play out. You just write these two so well!
Author's Response: Thank you! I wasn't sure if Jim was reading correctly here, so I'm glad to hear that he is.
Date: March 30, 2019 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 13: Corridor
This was a lot of fun. Now we have the opposite of that dying engine Jim picture from a few chapters back. Jim here is starting to light up again and find his footing. Pam's joy in her newfound freedom from Roy is only adding fuel to that engine, as evidenced by the prank he's planning.
The image of Pam nestled in his chest like that was also a cute image. Lots of really fun moments here. Including Pam saying she might still have need for that bridal room. Can't wait to see how this wraps up.
Author's Response: Thanks, warrior. I always appreciate how you find specific things to comment on. It's really helpful for the creative process!
Date: March 30, 2019 10:36 am Title: Chapter 13: Corridor
This was very sweet, especially Jim's awkwardness. The only thing I'm not that sure about is her using his name almost every time she addresses him. It takes a little bit of flow off the conversation. Other than that, my favourite chapter. Looking forwatd to the next, even though I really don't like this story to end.
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know about how that was impacting the flow! I had her doing it because it was a way to signal in a Jim-chapter that Pam is trying to connect with him and he's missing it. But I can totally see how it felt overdone! And thanks for reading and reviewing, as always.