Date: April 04, 2019 01:53 pm Title: If I Had a Million Dollars
Love this! Your dialogue for all characters is spot on. This could have been an episode of the show. Can't wait for chapter 2.
Oh and if you haven't heard that song a million times then you are not Canadian! Its practically our national anthem. :-) I was waiting for Jim to say "Haven't you always wanted a monkey?"
Author's Response: Thanks Sprinkles! I’m always afraid to tackle the rest of the characters but I’m just going for it with this story :) and no lie - I had the monkey line written and I deleted and retyped it like 7 times before deleting it for good. It was almost there! ;)
1 [Report This]Date: April 03, 2019 06:48 pm Title: If I Had a Million Dollars
Such a great start! (And a great song). I like the idea of a wish really working just because.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
1 [Report This]Date: April 03, 2019 07:26 am Title: If I Had a Million Dollars
Oh I am loving this! Get chapter 2 up soon, not just because I wants it (but I do want it) but also because MTT doesn't display chapter titles unless there's at least 2 chapters.
Also, loving the wishes theme, hoping Pam gets it with Jim and not with someone else (and of course that we're not in the Grimm world where fairytale is a very bad word).
Author's Response:
Thanks, Comfect! Fear not, the next chapter will go up sometime tonight. Its not going to be a very long story (15k might be stretching it, but you know how we tend to get long-winded sometimes!) and most of it is already written, so the wait for updates won’t be long at all.
Lol! Can you imagine if I took this into the world of Grimm? Poor Pam! No, it’s all fluff and fun from here on out. Well, mostly anyways. :)
Date: April 02, 2019 11:18 pm Title: If I Had a Million Dollars
Coley! Your writing is so natural and believable and I can just see them and hear them and BELIEVE that it is all happening! I don't know what you have in store, but I am sure it will be just a real as the room I am sitting in!
So I was not familiar with the Barenakedladies song so I looked up the lyrics (did my research) before reading the story. The next story that's posted has 'treehouse' in the title, but I got a little confused and assumed there would be a treefort. But I like the not-real green dress. And poor Karen is so confused and I cannot wait for the next chapter.
I really adore your writing. All your story notes had me prepared for something weird and a stretch, but so far, it is just . . . I can just hear Pam breathing in and breathing out. And chuckling. And grinning. And I can't wait!
Author's Response: Clover, your words are always so nice and they always make me smile, so thank you for that! Don’t worry, the ‘something weird’ is coming but it’s fun and worth it, I hope!
1 [Report This]Date: April 02, 2019 09:45 pm Title: If I Had a Million Dollars
So here I am, sitting in the parking lot of a gas station in my ambulance having just brought a guy to the ER because, and I wish I was kidding, he had a toothache. I hit refresh to see if I've got any new reviews on my story and...well no I didn't. However there was something just as good. A new story by one of my favorite authors. Hooray!
Okay now that I've got that out of my system. This story was actually a lot of fun. We start out feeling for Pam here in her season-of-angst blues and slowly we're seeing hope start to bloom. Great Jim and Pam banter to start things out. The addition of that song was a lot of fun. The images of Jim leaning in to have some classic Jim and Pam type moments was wonderful to imagine.
So far this isn't dumb at all. I'm really looking forward to seeing how it all pans out.
Author's Response: Thanks warrior! Hopefully the next chapter is just as fun :)