Date: February 10, 2008 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger
Poor guy, just can't escape Pam...as if we want him to. lol
Date: October 30, 2006 09:33 am Title: Chapter 1: The Merger
Interesting premise for a story. Hope you continue - I'd like to see where your version of the merger goes.
Date: October 29, 2006 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger
"illiciting" -- no. Common mistake. You want "eliciting".
She looked beautiful. And his heart was relieved, full, and in pain. And she was in Stamford. In his office. At his job. And in his life again.
Oh shit....
GREAT ending. Heh. Poor Jim.
Date: October 29, 2006 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger
Oooh, interesting. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: October 29, 2006 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger
Loved this line - "And his heart was relieved, full, and in pain" and then the "oh shit" at the end. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: October 29, 2006 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger
love this premise -- cannot wait to see where you take us!!
Date: October 29, 2006 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger
Yay for Pam in Stamford! Can't wait to see where you go with this.
Date: October 29, 2006 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger
Interesting. Can't wait to see your version of the merger.
Date: October 29, 2006 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger
Nice set-up. Poor Jim, first he's sick, then Pam comes back. Let the awkwardness begin!
Date: October 29, 2006 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger
Oh, I like it - things should turn out very differently on that other turf. Look forward to part two.
Only question I have is, are you going to explain why these particular people are kept on? Seems an odd combination but perhaps there's some reason.
Date: October 29, 2006 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger
Very nice -hope you're continuing with this! It would be good to see Pam out of her safety zone.
Date: October 29, 2006 11:59 am Title: Chapter 1: The Merger
That's an interesting idea for a story. I hope you continue it.
Date: October 29, 2006 10:27 am Title: Chapter 1: The Merger
haha loved it!