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Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger

Poor guy, just can't escape Pam...as if we want him to. lol

Reviewer: TV_Buffy Anonymous 7 [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2006 09:33 am Title: Chapter 1: The Merger

Interesting premise for a story. Hope you continue - I'd like to see where your version of the merger goes.

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 5 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2006 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger

"illiciting" -- no. Common mistake. You want "eliciting".

 

She looked beautiful. And his heart was relieved, full, and in pain. And she was in Stamford. In his office. At his job. And in his life again.

Oh shit....

 

GREAT ending. Heh. Poor Jim. 

 

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2006 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger

Oooh, interesting.  Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2006 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger

Loved this line - "And his heart was relieved, full, and in pain"  and then the "oh shit" at the end.  Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2006 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger

love this premise -- cannot wait to see where you take us!!

Reviewer: Jonah5 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2006 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger

Yay for Pam in Stamford!  Can't wait to see where you go with this.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2006 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger

Interesting. Can't wait to see your version of the merger.

Reviewer: Par5 Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2006 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger

Nice set-up. Poor Jim, first he's sick, then Pam comes back. Let the awkwardness begin!

Reviewer: Promethea Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2006 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger

Oh, I like it - things should turn out very differently on that other turf.  Look forward to part two.

 Only question I have is, are you going to explain why these particular people are kept on?  Seems an odd combination but perhaps there's some reason. 

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2006 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger

Very nice -hope you're continuing with this!  It would be good to see Pam out of her safety zone.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2006 11:59 am Title: Chapter 1: The Merger

That's an interesting idea for a story.  I hope you continue it.

Reviewer: LittleKidLover Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2006 10:27 am Title: Chapter 1: The Merger

haha loved it!

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