Date: February 10, 2008 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 4: It Hurts
Aw I feel for both of them -- the pain is palpable. Great chapter, looking forward to finding out what Jim means by wanting her to know...more than once. =)
6 [Report This]Date: November 03, 2006 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 4: It Hurts
Enough. Don't spin this out any more. They've had their tears and their recriminations; it's time for the reconciliation. Go for it!
Author's Response: I appreciate your commentary, however, this is my story and I have ideas of where I want to go with it.
9 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2006 08:31 am Title: Chapter 4: It Hurts
While I definitely think Pam needs to make the first move, I'm really liking the fact that you are writing Jim to be a bit more flexible in what he's willing to do as well. Looking forward to more!
Date: November 01, 2006 07:05 am Title: Chapter 4: It Hurts
OMG, when I saw there were TWO new chapters, I thought it was safe to read, but I am now FREAKING out waiting for the next one!
Great premise & I am just enthralled at how these two will work out the pain and awkwardness ~~ you are exploring some new depths with Jim ~~ and I am not usually much on the angst, so, well done!
8 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2006 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 4: It Hurts
I so liked that confrontation. More please