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Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 03:06 pm Title: Epilogue

Awww I'm so glad they resolved everything (or most of everything). Jim's so sweet to take care of her. Great story, loved the angst...and the happy ending, of course. =)

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 06, 2006 04:46 pm Title: Epilogue

wonderful fic. Loved it all.

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 06, 2006 12:02 pm Title: Epilogue

Very sweet ending!  And I really liked angsty!Jim - like you I think he has the right to be.  So does Pam, in her own way, and I think you addressed that just right.  Now they can live happily (sniffly?) ever after.  :-)

Reviewer: Winky Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 06, 2006 09:07 am Title: Epilogue

Aww. That was sweet. I love how it came full-circle from the beginning. One thing- make sure to type out any numbers less than ten. For example: "He put the bag on the counter and pulled out 2 cans.." should be "two cans". it's a formality, but the digits can be distracting unless they're describing large numbers. Great fic, and I look forward to more from you!

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