1 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2021 06:19 pm Title: The Date
This is wonderful from the start. You have an amazing knack for description; it flows, pulling me along.
I will never, ever eat carbonara the same way again.
1 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2019 11:28 pm Title: The Date
Not quite sure why you call this canon-divergent. Seems to fit well within established canon. Obviously Jim and Pam did go on a date that night so I don't see anything diverging from canon. Just your take on how the date went away from the doc cameras is all.
Anyway, lot of fun with this last chapter. Nice to get Pam's POV this time around. The shadows of their past are still there, but that's all they are now. Shadows. The light of their new relationship is easily casting those old fears aside as they reach out for each other here.
Very cute and very sweet to see them like this. First Date fics are usually a lot of fun. This one is too. Lots of great introspection as Jim and Pam finally form the JAM we all know and love.
1 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2019 09:46 pm Title: The Date
I am always here for a first date story & this was no exception! I liked how your breakup between Karen and Jim played out. I do wonder if the nonexistent canon version would have them talking about Pam as it happened or if it was the elephant in the room.,.
Their date was lovely and felt very them. This was a great read!