1 [Report This]Date: October 07, 2020 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ah, you made Austen-era Dundies! Cute! Meredith as the innkeeper is inspired, as is the "Chi"valrous "Li"on and bringing in dancing as a theme. I just find this version of Jim and Pam very harming.
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you liked it and that you spotted the Chili's joke :)
1 [Report This]Date: January 29, 2020 06:51 am Title: Chapter 5
This is lovely. A delight to read. I might point out that traditionally two dances would not be consecutive--but I think Dunder Mifflin could easily be so eccentric a manor as to make that reasonable. Roy especially would want to get his out of the way (and yes, he should dance three with his fiancee so he has definitely failed poor Pam). Lovely as always.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you for your kind words! And I think Roy just wanted to be done with his responsibilities as soon as possible... well, his loss :)
1 [Report This]Date: January 27, 2020 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
It's been a while since I've been read and I think that your writing improves with each chapter! I think you are doing a fantastic job weaving The Office and Jane Austen together. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I do my best and I'm glad you noticed improvements :)
1 [Report This]Date: January 08, 2020 02:18 am Title: Chapter 5
I loved this chapter so, so much. The way you seamlessly wove moments from canon into it in a way that both keep the heart of the original, but also fit with the period was wonderful. The Dundies without them being the Dundies was so great. Of course Michael would manage to accidentally insult everyone by meaning to compliment them. Typical Michael.
All the Pam and Jim moments were just lovely. The way they bounce off each other feels so natural. All the references to Pam’s dorky dancing were a lot of fun.
Bring on the dancing!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I appreciate every bit of it, and I'm very glad you like the story :)
Date: January 06, 2020 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
Lovely chapter here. Shades of Casino Night, The Dundies, and the Booze Cruise if I don't miss my mark. They all blended together seamlessly here so well done for getting that through. I really like how Jim and Pam are collaborating here. That they just have the easy rapport with each other like in canon.
Looking forward to seeing how the rest of this plays out.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad I kept the canon events recognizable.
Also, there was a hint of 'Phyllis' Wedding,' though I'll put that line on in the story later :)