1 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2020 02:44 pm Title: Part 1
Well, those were some serious fireworks at midnight for Jim and Pam - and with no small debt to Ryan being the absolute worst, no less! I like it - and especially the choice to get them drunk, because Jim and Pam definitely would've gotten together much earlier with a little more alcohol.
1 [Report This]Date: December 31, 2019 12:39 pm Title: Part 1
Oh I am very much looking forward to chapter 2. Jim's POV was great; nicely in character I think, so I'm excited for her POV.
Author's Response: Thank you! You are too kind. Part 2 is up now! I'd love to hear what you think.
Date: December 30, 2019 02:43 pm Title: Part 1
This is a fun story, and that kiss was perfect.looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you very much. I just posted part 2...
1 [Report This]Date: December 29, 2019 04:24 am Title: Part 1
Great to see a continuation. I love that it’s a glimpse into NYE too.
Oh Ryan, I kind of love that he’s a cocky asshole sometimes, not going to lie. Although, not very fair to Kelly. This was a perfect blend of that, and served a dual purpose of getting into Jim’s head.
Looking forward to seeing Pam’s perspective.
Author's Response: Thank you! And glad you liked what I did with Ryan. He's definitely a character I love to hate. I just posted Part 2. Hope to see you back here again soon.
1 [Report This]Date: December 28, 2019 09:22 pm Title: Part 1
Nice follow up to the first fic. Yeah, you've got Ryan being a little prick here with everything. Good on ya Pam to shoot him down in more ways than one.
Jim getting more and more nervous as the night goes on seems very in keeping. Of course he notices everything about her. I wonder what was going through her head as she got all done up for the party? Was she just trying to feel pretty for herself? A rare chance to get a little dolled up that normally doesn't happen? Maybe wanting to impress a certain someone? Made me wonder.
That midnight kiss though. Lots of hope, fear, wonder, all wrapped up in one. Then to have her run off like that? Yeah, I get why Jim needs to hurl. Really looking forward to seeing how the rest of this pans out.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for continuing reading my story! Your thoughts about what Jim might have been thinking make me wish I'd focused on that a little more, lol. I just posted part 2. Hope you get the chance to read it.