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Reviewer: HonestAndCourageous Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 11, 2020 06:52 pm Title: Tuesday, September 19, 1995

"Teen lingo" ha! That was a perfect Michael saying and a very Michael thing to do!
But I'm hoping Pam comes to her senses in the next chapter....

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11, 2020 03:29 pm Title: Tuesday, September 19, 1995

Awww Pam. No, don't settle for Roy. You clearly don't like him, why oh why are you doing this to yourself? Well I know why, she's still a teenager and thus quite liable to make bad decisions. Such as hanging out with Roy all the time. I get where's she's coming from, but at the same time I've never been a big fan of teenage drama. She's giving mixed signals to both James and Roy. Telling Roy to lay off but hanging out with him and allowing him to have his arm around her. Saying she's still James' girlfriend but it seems not really putting as much effort into that situation as she could. Though that may be a little unkind as she does also have a job.

Still a great look into her mindset even if it's not my most favorite part of her journey. Something also tells me that dance is going to end in disaster in either the long or short run. Or both.

Author's Response:

I have a plan for the story and I'll say I'm annoyed writing Roy into, but I think it'll be a crucial piece in the end. 

It definitely shows a possibility as to how she ended up engaged to him for 10 years! 

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