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Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2020 06:39 am Title: Chapter 13: At Cross Purposes

Aww, I do like Pam's planning. And it was lovely to 'walk' in Sidney with them. Hope to continue this 'journey' soon :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2020 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 13: At Cross Purposes

After that line about a quiet neighbor in the hostel, I now suspect that Pam has stumbled into the same hostel as Jim & has taken up residence in the room previously occupied by the Germans?! Will this wild prediction prove accurate, I guess only time will tell...
Another lovely update. I love the Halpert Helper. It’s such a fun way for Pam to work on tracking Jim down. This story is so much the richer for no cell phone calls/Jim telling everyone the exact details of his trip, i.e. the name of his hostel.

Author's Response: Thank you! Pam seems to me to be the kind of person who would keep that kind of list. I don't know quite why.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2020 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 13: At Cross Purposes

So are they at the same hostel? Staying in the same place and only separated by a wall at night? You don't have to answer if you don't want to, but that's quite devious.

I did Google the Maritime Museum and the best response for an aquarium was something called Sea Life. If that's the one you're thinking of, that's all sorts of devious fun considering their location on the map. Bravo.

I like that Jim has an inner scientist in him. Kinda fun to bring out a new facet of his personality. Don't worry Jim. Methinks sometime in the (nearish) future you'll be able to tell Pam all about your adventures.

The Halpert Helper is wonderfully cute. Good instincts Pam. Wasn't really expecting her to find him right away of course. What fun would that be? Still nice to see she's on the hunt.

Author's Response: Good googling! Thank you for your attention to detail, as always, and it won't be too long now.

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