Date: March 28, 2020 06:02 am Title: Chapter 20: Drinks
Got all caught up on the last few chapters, where they see each other and he’s waving and she kisses him and I just love it so much! It’s very Jim and Pam. I’m glad they’re getting to have all of their talk with just the two of them, because I wonder what all Pam would have said if there hadn’t been a crowd of people watching her spill her heart out. So this is a good look into that! I love how you write their playful flirtiness mixed with awkwardness. Great job as always!
Author's Response: More coming! I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I do think it's valuable to not have an audience for Pam--she's not always the most public person.
Date: March 28, 2020 12:22 am Title: Chapter 20: Drinks
Awww, it's so cute how they go back and forth between teasing and flirting! I enjoy every piece of their exchanges :)
Thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: March 28, 2020 12:04 am Title: Chapter 20: Drinks
I barely have time to read the update & then there’s a new one! It’s wonderful! I’m so glad to know that I have this story to look forward to at the moment.
Much like Pam, this chapter was adorable. I love that they’re a little bit flirty and all kinds of bantery. And the Chili’s reference - nice to know that Pam remembers that moment. Way to turn around on Jim at the end there, maybe Phyllis wasn’t so far off the mark...
Author's Response: That's my goal! I appreciate that you like their banter :) It's not easy for me to be confident in the banter, so this is good to hear.
1 [Report This]Date: March 27, 2020 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 20: Drinks
“Screw you, Halpert, this isn’t a Chilis.” And just like that he knew she remembered just like he did.
“No, I don’t think you screwed me…”
“OH MY GOD.”
This may just be one of the best non-canon thing to happen between Jim and Pam, I loved it. Great chapter!!
Author's Response: I really appreciate that! It was fun to write, so I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: March 27, 2020 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 20: Drinks
Great banter. Also a seamless transition of POV's there too. The end though was for me the best part. After making her find several new shades of red, she is able to turn the tables and get the reaction out of him with those two little words.
Just wonderful how you've got them bouncing off each other. It's fun, it's easy, it's adorable, it's them. Lovely as always.
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate it, especially coming from you.
Date: March 27, 2020 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 20: Drinks
So short, but so much fun!!! Keep the chapters coming
Author's Response: Thanks! That's my goal, and I will.