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Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2020 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 42: Sleepless Nights in the Non-Fun Way

Oooh, I wonder what Jim is up to! It seems promising!
There’s plenty of sorting through the what’s not going to work here. All very logical and delightfully in character. I like that Pam is distracted by other things, not just Stamford looming over them.

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope the solution works for you like it does for me!

Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2020 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 42: Sleepless Nights in the Non-Fun Way

I hope he really found something useful in these mails!
Oh, a little funny thing I noticed: just a previous day Pam wasn't ready to move after Jim, and now she made plans on how to replace Polly. That's the power of love!

Author's Response: Thank you for taking that as the power of love and not an error ;). I do think she's evolving there though, now that she's realizing what being with Jim really means for her. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2020 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 42: Sleepless Nights in the Non-Fun Way

What Pam needs to do is take that internship in NY, since it’s closer to Stamford.

Can’t wait to read what Jim printed out.
Jellybean!!

Author's Response: That is a good idea. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2020 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 42: Sleepless Nights in the Non-Fun Way

Why do I feel like the Polly section was aimed at me 😂. Looking forward to seeing how Jim jimmies the paperwork to get out of this one.

Author's Response:

Let's not say aimed at: let's say inspired by. I hadn't thought of it, and I wanted to dismiss it so I could get to what I had thought of (it was a good idea though!). Thanks :) 

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2020 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 42: Sleepless Nights in the Non-Fun Way

I'm excited to see what Jim found!! I hope they're able to find a solution!!

Author's Response: I think they did, but I look forward to your feedback on it!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2020 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 42: Sleepless Nights in the Non-Fun Way

Good for Jim to keep looking in at this. I've got a feeling he'll have something up his sleeve. When Jim really puts his mind to something it usually pays off well. Can't wait to see what he'd got figured out.

Good introspection from Pam too. I love that she's trying to find a solution as well. And it's not, just, so she doesn't feel odd about inviting Jim into her room with the specter of Stamford. It's also because she really cares for him and I love that.

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you find this appropriate to the situation.

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