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Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20, 2020 12:13 am Title: Chapter 43: Resume

I feel like I’ve said this before, but Ryan is definitely the most logical substitute/sacrifice. Although, I wouldn’t want to be Pam or Jim if/when Kelly figures out the hand they had in it... I would want to a fly on the wall for it though, if you needed future chapter suggestions...

Author's Response: He really is. Hopefully this works out, and...yeah, they might need to duck when Kelly finds out. Thanks!

Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2020 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 43: Resume

Go, Ryan, go! Ang oh my gosh, I'm so in love with the way they acted when they're up to something! Is there something that could stop 'Team Jam'? I doubt it.
'I always choose you, Halpert.'
Awwww. Just awwww.

Author's Response: Thank you! 

Reviewer: HonestAndCourageous Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2020 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 43: Resume

Giapetto?! Giapetto and Pinocchio is a perfect metaphor for how Michael views his relationship with Ryan!
Good to see Jim and Pam collaborating again, and this time for the benefit of their relationship together. Love their last two comments to each other. I'm never disappointed when I read an update on this story! Thanks for writing!

Author's Response: Thank you! I thought it was apt too :)

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2020 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 43: Resume

Did you just in one fell swoop solve many of the issues that plagued DM Scranton in S3? Lets see, provided this works, it means Jim stays so that's a fix. Jim gets his desk back, also a fix. We get rid of Ryan, who has always been a bit of a jerk so that's a fix. So yeah, that fixes a lot. Well done.

Love that Jim was able to focus and get this plan in motion. When Jim puts his mind to it, good things usually happen and that comes off well here. Even better with Pam at his side for it all.

Author's Response: I mean, it may take several swoops to make it actually happen but yes, I think that would solve a lot of S3--though what will happen when the branches remerge? Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: beth9501 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2020 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 43: Resume

“As a temp or as a real boy?”

I laughed out loud at this line! So funny.

As always, awesome updates to keep us going. I'm thoroughly enjoying them!

Author's Response: Thank you! I enjoyed that line :)

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