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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2020 11:39 am Title: Chapter 59: Koalas!

It's a really nice bonus for this story that I get to learn some fun koala facts along the way to Jim and Pam's happy ending.

Author's Response: Thank you! I think I did more research for this story than for any other I've written, by several times over, so I'm glad it's coming through!

Reviewer: HonestAndCourageous Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2020 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 59: Koalas!

First off, I'm so glad these two got a "re do" of their time on the boat. Very sweet.
Second, koalas are so strange. But I enjoyed learning about them. I really feel like I'm going on a tour of Sydney here! Thanks for writing and the virtual tour with two of my favorite characters!

Author's Response: Thank you! That is one of my goals, really glad it's coming through.

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2020 03:46 am Title: Chapter 59: Koalas!

In response to your response to my previous review. I quite like Melbourne - mostly because my grandparents lived there so it reminds me of Christmas and family.
Sydney is all potholes and toll roads - would not recommend driving through it, ever.
My favorite capital city is Darwin, because I’m from nearish there. Plus, I love the heat & it’s a tropical city. Adelaide would probably be my next fave, it’s a bit underrated. It’s got a beautiful coast.
Brisbane I also have a soft spot for - I’ve lived there before & I’m pretty close to it presently.
Essentially though, there’s two sides to Australia - Sydney & Melbourne are their own hipstery thing, & there’s the rest of us, with a far more country vibe. It breaks my heart when tourists only make it to Sydney/Melbourne - there’s so much more to see. The outback is truly what makes Australia...

Enough of that tangent. Onto the story!
Well, this was all kinds of adorable! I love a good koala. Jim naming his Dwight was delightful - an insult to koalas the world over.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I appreciate the mini-reviews. If I ever get a chance to travel there...sigh.

 And thank you! 

Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2020 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 59: Koalas!

Oh my gosh, that was wonderful! This chapter is the first thing I read in the morning and it gave me a lot of 'awww's and giggles.
And now I'm stuck. Stuck with the image of Dwight, cuddling with branches and chewing leaves melancholically. I'm not sure I could erase it from my brain, but that's fine :)
Thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you! I liked that image too... a lot.

Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2020 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 59: Koalas!

Dwight the Koala! Jellybeans

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2020 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 59: Koalas!

Oh boy, lilo and stitch was a long time ago. Another enjoyable low fat chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2020 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 59: Koalas!

You did it again. Sitting at work my partner looked over at me like I'm a crazy person. That last line implying that Stitch is smarter than Dwight? Genius. Accurate too. After all Stitch can operate an interplanetary spaceship. Dwight has issues with the copier from time to time so there's no real contest.

I digress. Adorable chapter. Educational too. There was some stuff in there I really didn't know. Lots of good times all around.

Author's Response: I'm proud of my ability to make you laugh. Especially in ways that make your partner think you're crazy. Glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: beth9501 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2020 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 59: Koalas!

DWIGHT! I love it. That's so funny. This was a fun update:)

Author's Response: Thank you! 

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