Oh, yes, I definitely want to see how Dwight would protect Pam from Jim!
Also - I grinned like an idiot when I read the whole moving-in scene (except for the part where Pam was crying; but it was needed tears).
And I enjoy so much the subtlety of the way Jim and Pam getting closer. All these hugs, and kisses on the cheek, and planning of spending time together... I'm a sucker for these things, I guess :)

Author's Response:

Oops, I may have yadda yadda'd that bit. I'll see if we can cover the Dwight saves Pam prank in a later chapter, as to be honest I forgot about that bit while writing the next one.

I'm glad the move-in got a smile from you, that's what most of my writing is all about!

Thanks for reviewing, glad to hear you're enjoying things! 

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Very nice chapter all around. Seems like the talk with Mom did Pam a lot of good there. Lovely to see her start down a path of who she wants to be. Great to see.

Well done on the prank too. I love the image of Dwight fuming while Pam is sitting at her desk acting as if nothing's wrong and all the while Jim is in awe of her. Just lovely.

One last thing though, Jim's last line to her. Have you been watching "The Princess Bride," of late? If so, there is of course a double meaning there and if that's what you intend, bravo for a great use of that line.

Author's Response:

Watching of late? No. Every visit to my grandparents ever in my childhood? Yes. Will Pam catch on to this? We'll have to wait and see.

I'm glad you liked the Dwight prank seen, that was what I was going for.

And yeah, Pam's mom with the truth bombs was a hard one to write, but I felt like she needed a push.

Glad you enjoyed, thanks for reviewing! I always look forward to your feedback.