Date: May 11, 2020 09:33 am Title: The Dundies
I LOVE the award Pam received!
Also, I'm grinning like an idiot (apparently, that's my usual condition when I'm reading happy, lovely and fluffy Jam). And I'm feeling blessed because I dodged the cliffhanger, and I'm going to go straight to the next chapter!
You did a fantastic job modifying the canon event into your AU!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked the award, I couldn't resist the canon nod there.
I'm really glad I can make you smile with this story, that's what I'm here for!
You definitely cheated that cliffhanger ;)
Thank you! Happy to hear you liked my Dundies adaptation.
Date: May 07, 2020 03:28 am Title: The Dundies
This was a lovely reworking of the Dundies! I liked your original touches, like changing up the Dundie that Pam got. I’m so glad you kept in all the good stuff too, like second drink and the kiss! I can’t wait to see what you do with the question!
Author's Response:
I'm happy you enjoyed it, this chapter was a lot of fun to write. Pam's Dundie is of course a nod to her becoming FNB a whole year early. You shouldn't have to wait too long to see what the question is, I'm almost done writing the next chapter at the time of reply.
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: May 06, 2020 11:27 pm Title: The Dundies
Bravo! Fantastic job with the Dundies.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: May 06, 2020 08:57 pm Title: The Dundies
Oh man, that's a very different context for that line...a very exciting cliffhangery one. I am very glad you decided to give us this version of the Dundies and I'm interested in where we go!
Author's Response:
I'm glad I can keep you on your toes, we'll see what happens next soon, I promise! Good to hear that you liked my take on the Dundies, it was a lot of fun to write.
Thanks for reviewing!
1 [Report This]Date: May 06, 2020 05:16 pm Title: The Dundies
Now you've done it. You've really entered the fold of MTT writers by leaving a nasty cliffhanger like that. I mean it's a good place to leave it, but still. Just kidding, since of course I've left my fair share of evil cliffhangers so all's good.
Lots of fun here. Nice touch having the warehouse crew leave like that. Of course it happened in canon, but rather than a bit of disappointment, we get just instant relief. Drunk Pam was adorable as she usually is. Can't wait to see how this all pans out.
Author's Response:
Had, I couldn't not when I was writing it, I kept going for a little but then moved the extra to next chapter figuring this would be a good fit. Glad you can empathize.
I'm glad you liked the chapter, I wanted the warehouse crew to be there long enough to bring the mood down, but then I banished them because, really, nobody likes those guys. Except Darryl, but he's just too cool for the warehouse anyway. Drunk Pam was and is a joy to write, so hopefully we'll see where this goes in a bit.
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: May 06, 2020 05:05 pm Title: The Dundies
Awesome update! Nice cliff hanger too. My reaction was very close to, "NOOOOO!" So it worked.
I am intrigued to see what you have up your sleeve for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm really glad that you liked the chapter.
Thanks for reviewing!