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Reviewer: Duchess Cupcake Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2020 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

Is it... it's wrong to wish insomnia on someone, right? Cause if we get THIS from a few sleepless nights...

I'm (mostly) kidding, of course. But I'm also a sucker for Pam's Wild Summer and especially the idea of how Mr. Jawline played into that. Honestly, no one could that justice but you. And boy did you ever! Jumping right in with straight with tequila, ending with that proposition, and all of the Sassy Pam in between? Perfect.

I'm just really glad you have plans to give us more of this incomplete fic...

Reviewer: cncgrad02 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2020 04:12 am Title: Chapter 1

You know, I never really thought of these two and how they met and knowing that they “went out a couple of times and it just fizzled” (thank you, Pam, for providing me with a paraphrase!). After reading this, however, you’ve got my mind going a mile an hour thinking of scenarios! What were those couple of dates like? How was Pam affected when it just fizzled? How did the conversation go when she told Jim about going out with Danny (and other stuff haha)- because you know they had the awkward “tell me about everyone you’ve ever been with conversation” after they were finally together themselves (can’t you just see it now? “Well, there was this one guy I met in a bar...” “Beesly?!”)? But most importantly, how did it go down when she realized that Danny was going to be working with her and Jim? There’s no way you can leave this where it is! I mean, there’s *at least* 4 more chapters here!

I loved this story! I was really able to watch this scene unfold as it happened! I loved the bit where Pam checks his watch. And the mentioning of how Isabelle teaches her a thing if two? Being single is just like that! I wouldn’t know the first way if catching a guy’s attention anymore! Oh, and the ending few lines, too! Just a perfect portrayal of how Pam is trying hard to become New Beesly. Great job!

Reviewer: SprinklesTheCat Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2020 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

What an ending! Please tell me we might see another chapter. I love how your Pam can hold her liquor, and she gives a lot of Pam-sass too.

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 09:54 am Title: Chapter 1

I’d ask you to apologize to me also but I encouraged this.

Why are you so good??

“Maybe. Still not as sorry as if I was getting married.”

Also, when she realized that a week ago, Danny would’ve had her right away, but now not so much? WE LOVE A GIRL WITH GROWTH.

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 09:36 am Title: Chapter 1

I came back to say that I'm dumb because I just realized that this is Danny. Which makes this marginally better, but if Jim doesn't fit into this somewhere I'm still upset

Reviewer: beth9501 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 09:31 am Title: Chapter 1

One, the opening line....almost had me spitting out my water. Two, this whole premise is just perfect for self destructive Pam. I am loving it. Three, I love drunk Pam so much (hence my current fic lol). Four, this is setting itself up to be the next live read on the chat. Anddd Five, calling out Aly. Lol funny.

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 09:26 am Title: Chapter 1

I was literally about to start yelling at you about why do you have to do this to me when I saw the authors note and it made me laugh so I'm less angry. But, Coley, why. Ugh my heart hurts but you know I'm going to keep reading this because I need to know when Jim comes. Couldn't your insomnia make your write Farmer Jim or Mob Jim?? Or More Spins???? On the bright side, least it's not Ryan, or at least I'm assuming it's not Ryan since I assume she would know who Ryan is in this universe.

Also, this was great I loved the banter and this makes me want to hang out with Pam in a bar.

Reviewer: Donnamour1969 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 07:18 am Title: Chapter 1

I couldn't have resisted him either, Pam...great stuff here. Big Grey's fan myself too. I don't mind this rip off at all😍

Reviewer: boredhswf Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 06:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh Coley, you never disappoint.

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 01:03 am Title: Chapter 1

Coley. Coley. COLEY.
All I’ve read so far is the note & I’m already spiraling. I am SO excited for this. You know how I feel about early Grey’s.

Oh god. Is this Danny Cordray?!

Cool. Make tequila her drink of choice. That’s not going to fuck me up at all. It’s fine. Totally fine.

Look. I don’t love Danny Cordray as Derek, but I. Love. This.

This is going to be the thing that puts me in the mood to actually catch up on Grey’s, isn’t it...

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 12:16 am Title: Chapter 1

Why are you so good at writing stories that are just a kick to the chest? Oh Pam, I know you're struggling, I get it. Uugh. Great writing even if it tears at the heart.

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