1 [Report This]Date: June 26, 2020 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
“she means the statue, not the accountant.” Oh, this is such a great line. I love a little sarcasm and humor with my Pam.
“and moves tubs around, looking for a flavour that matches her current spirits, until her hand feels numb” Ugh. This is such a mood. I love the imagery here to bring that miserable tone out.
Wow, a throwback to the fabric softener scene. It’s fine. I’m fine. My heart isn’t cracking in two or anything.
Oh yes! What a revelation. What a way to end. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! You are a wonderful reviewer.
I've done the ice cream thing once or twice, not on purpose but yeah... it's a mood.
Again, thanks a lot! I hope you like the rest.
1 [Report This]Date: June 26, 2020 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
Love it so far. Please have more chapters soon!!!
Author's Response: I did! Thanks for reviewing!
1 [Report This]Date: June 26, 2020 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh man. Hurry with an update!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I did! :)
1 [Report This]Date: June 26, 2020 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
Well, well, well. So not putting the note in (which is what I got from chapter 1, correct me if I'm wrong) means similar emotion boiling over later. Very interesting approach. Definitely digging it!
Author's Response: Thanks very much, Comfect.
Yeah, she didn't put the note so... that might lead to other possibilities.
1 [Report This]Date: June 26, 2020 05:35 am Title: Chapter 2
Now there's an interesting twist on things. It felt like a day of pretending things are alright when she knows they're not. Then her realization there after she wakes up was really good to see. So now we have Pam rushing off to who knows where. I'm kinda hoping it's to New York. Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks an interesting way to put it. It feels as if during most of season 3 Pam is pretending things are alright, especially in this episode. Well... she's on her way. And the story is almost completely written :)
Thanks so much for reviewing!
1 [Report This]Date: June 25, 2020 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like the descriptions of Pam's thoughts so much! It felt like she was on the autopilot and then — on edge. I have so much sympathy for her and really, really hope that her world wouldn't end in a day or two.
Go, Pam!
*unintelligible cheering in the distance*
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks!
Pam's world isn't going to end... and since I love happy endings, it's not going to be too bad either :)
Go Pam indeed!