1 [Report This]Date: July 09, 2022 03:49 am Title: Chapter 5
Very enjoyable, a great twist on the end of Season 3. Nice pacing,too; I kept clicking the 'next' button to find out how she loved this problem. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks very much!! :)
1 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2020 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh that's lovely. Great ending. Both that she took some her-time and that he's still just as willing to drop everything for her. So glad you wrote this!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I love it when Pam is herself without depending on Jim.
1 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2020 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
The lovely ending of the lovely story!
I especially like that Pam, even frustrated, broken-hearted, and regretful, found some time to visit the museum instead of falling into the depth of despair. She chose herself, and that's awesome!
Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thanks very much!
One of the things I like the most about season 3 is the fact that Pam is finding a voice of her own, and I wanted to show a little bit of that.
Thanks again! I'm glad you liked it!
1 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2020 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 5
This was a lovely alt, all the same staples as the canon events, but spin in such a way that it all has a little more meaning. I really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it!
1 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2020 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
I like this description of Pam’s day. Making the most of her moment in New York and feeling kind of blank about the Jim thing. It’s almost as if she’s done something and by doing something there’s no regret eating her up. I imagine there would have been had she remained in Scranton...
Oh, and there’s Jim. Perfect. We’ve taken a slightly different way to get there, but I love that this wraps up with “it’s a date” also. I feel like this Pam was even more considered in her actions and it’s great the payoff is equally wonderful as canon.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much for your review! I wanted to keep those lines, because they are just wonderful.
And yeah, the museum part was Pam a little bit defeated, but kind of moving on. I think that's more or less the vibe she gives during the talking head right before Jim asks her out.
Thanks again!
1 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2020 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
I really like how this turned out. Great to see that Pam took advantage of being in New York to get some more perspective as well just enjoy the thing she loves so much. She's taking care of herself and it's lovely to see.
Of course the image of Jim sitting there waiting for her, especially with those lines, is also a wonderful thing to envision. Great job with this one. It was a lot of fun.
Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat
Author's Response:
Thanks W4! You know, one of the things about season 3 is that it's about Pam growing up and growing strong. So, in this case it's about enjoying a bit of the city, a bit of art, and then feeling happy enough to go back home.
And well, in this case, there is something waiting for her, but she already had some chance to be herself.
Thanks for your support!