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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2021 11:52 am Title: Prologue: from here, to where?

Interesting start to this one. As a committed Oscar fan (and as someone who always saw him as having a great deal of affection for Pam), I appreciate you giving him the chance to pre-redeem himself for Business School here. This also feels realistic, the sort of small change you can easily imagine happening and setting events on a very different path.

Looking forward to seeing where you go with this!

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2020 05:08 pm Title: Prologue: from here, to where?

This is an interesting setup and I'm looking forward to moving into the story. It's reasonably in canon and does a good job of presenting emotional stakes.

Reviewer: Sam Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2020 11:11 am Title: Prologue: from here, to where?

Great premise! I've really enjoyed it so far.
Thanks.

Author's Response: Glad you are liking it- thank you!

Reviewer: Kuri333 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2020 05:20 pm Title: Prologue: from here, to where?

Ouch! This chapter made my heart ache, which just proves how well written it is. I'm curious about what's next!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: Bai Bai Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2020 07:23 am Title: Prologue: from here, to where?

you have me sitting on the edge of my seat with this story!!

Author's Response: Haha, thanks so much for reading! 

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2020 03:08 pm Title: Prologue: from here, to where?

Welcome to MTT!
I so, so love a good twist on Season 3. This is a really lovely setup. I’m so glad to see Pam striving for some of that Fancy New Beesly boldness, even if things aren’t working out the way she would like with Jim.

Pam and Oscar’s friendship was great to see here. I hope she doesn’t overhear the same art show conversation as canon because I can imagine that would be all sorts of crushing with Oscar poised as one of her support people.

I’m really interested to see where you go with this - and who you have catching Pam’s attention...

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for such a warm welcome! I love it here already.

Pam/Oscar always seemed to me two people who would get along! Thanks for reading. 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2020 10:13 am Title: Prologue: from here, to where?

Yes it's a good set up to what it seems you're planning. Even though Jim is here with Karen and Pam is about to be with someone new, they still seem to share a connection even if they don't know it or want to know it. It very much feels like they both know they're not over the other one, but they're almost forcing themselves to try. At least that's what I'm getting out of it.

Nice to get into their headspace like this though.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's always interesting to get into the heads of S3 Jim and Pam. Thanks for reading!

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