Date: November 25, 2021 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 5: closed, but not forgotten
I love the parallels here - these two people who want to move on, and have found people they think they *can* move on with, and just can't bring themselves to cut ties. Even amidst all the angst, it gives you hope for them.
And this moon bounce scene is gorgeous and sweet and the kind of conversation I desperately hope they had sometime between The Job and Fun Run.
1 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2020 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 5: closed, but not forgotten
Please update soon!
Even though I love Jim,
I was not a fan of him in season 3.
He acted like he didn’t want Pam,
but he didn’t want anyone else to have
her either. Please update soon!
1 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2020 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 5: closed, but not forgotten
Please update soon!
Even though I love Jim,
I was not a fan of him in season 3.
He acted like he didn’t want Pam,
but he didn’t want anyone else to have
her either. Please update soon!
Date: August 15, 2020 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 5: closed, but not forgotten
Very much on point with the angst. I do wonder--you say it will continue with the episodes, but the arc you've sketched here emotionally is different than canon: Pam and Jim have talked a bit about the show, and Pam isn't single right now. So does that mean a different pace for their relationship going forward?
1 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2020 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 5: closed, but not forgotten
“sometimes in her charade Pam forgot Jim was human too” Oh, I absolutely love this. The idea that Pam can control all these elements of the narrative she’s telling apart from Jim and that’s where the whole thing becomes a little more dangerous. So good.
“It was almost robotic, but comfortable.” It’s funny (in a way) because this is essentially the life Pam was living with Roy... And now Jim is living it with Karen.
Oh boy. The moon bounce. I’m feeling all the feelings. Talking about the art show. Ahhh. There’s some confident Pam in there demanding an answer. My heart.
This was a really lovely, well written chapter. I get them needing to resolve the art show.
Date: July 25, 2020 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 5: closed, but not forgotten
Yes, all sorts of angsty here. Both of them trying to move on, both of them still having thoughts wrapped up about the other one. From where I sit, they're nowhere near over each other. Even as they tell each other they are and want to be, the heart knows what the heart wants.
Each time I see an update I wonder if this will be the chapter they'll finally get together. Looks like we still have a little more to go in that regard.