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Reviewer: Donnamour1969 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2020 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ok. I'm in. I've read other threesome fics with Karen and Ryan. Danny sounds like fun😉

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, we needed a good Danny story in the mix! I hope you enjoyed the second part!

Reviewer: NobleLandMermaid Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2020 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

If you’re driving to hell then I’ll call shotgun! I’m honored to have helped bring this fic about XD And what a start! Like Coley said, you’ve set it up a plausible scenario and I am totally with it. I can easily imagine Danny and Jim sitting around BSing and both being effortlessly charming and can also imagine Pam just getting drunk and increasingly turned on (who wouldn’t with those two). Beardy Jim is just the cherry on top ;-) I will need part two ASAP as possible, I can’t wait!

Author's Response: We should all be thanking YOU since without you bringing it up in the first place this wouldn’t exist! I am glad that it didn’t disappoint!

Reviewer: Coley Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2020 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

BT, you son of a bitch - you’re just going to leave us hanging off the cliff like that? Rude.

What’s even more rude is how freaking good you are at this whole writing thing. Like, I BELIEVE this plot. It makes sense. I can see Jim and Pam playing “maybe they can be our third” and getting gin drunk and asking each other the important questions, and just... all of it.

The texts were perfect - innocent but only if you wanted them to be.

And then dinner. Ugh. It’s all so good. I love the accidental foot brush. Touchy-feely Jim and Pam. Danny checking Jim our.

But listen. Jim and the drop of water? Bury me next to Pam because I died too.

I really hope your sense of soon isn’t my sense of soon and you need to know I already love chapter 2 of this without having seen any of it.

Author's Response: I know I know! It was so mean of me to cut it short. It just got longer than I like my chapters to be and I didn’t want to rush anything, you know? I’m so glad it felt realistic! I worried if it would feel too OOC, so I’m glad that it didn’t. Thank you so much, Coley!

Reviewer: Guten Schriftsteller Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2020 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh never a huge fan of Danny is the show but you have a very steamy fic started here and I can’t wait to see where you take this.

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoyed chapter two and have some nicer feelings towards Danny now! 😉

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