1 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2021 09:39 pm Title: Grand Canyon
I was looking for a short fic to read and wow did this fit the bill. I loved every single postcard, it made me really miss the show and it’s not often a fic can do that. Wonderful!
1 [Report This]Date: December 31, 2020 08:41 am Title: Grand Canyon
This was really lovely. Such a great collection of moments. I have some mixed feelings about this relationship, but you really captured the heart they wrote into it.
Atlantic City was probably my favorite for the sheer Michael-ness of what he was trying to accomplish, but him using an “I GOT LUCKY” postcard from Vegas to tell her Holly was pregnant is definitely classic Michael Scott. And the line from the Season Four one: “That summer was the best summer, because she shared it with him. Shared everything, all of her. So of course she shared the postcard.” I mean, actual chills with that, and then the image of Michael falling into a chocolate river. You really packed a lot into these.
The different names were a really nice touch. Pampelmousse is VERY Michael, but I think you struck a nice balance with these, including enough Michael nicknames to make it all the more noticeable and sweet when he called her Mrs. Halpert and Pam when he was trying to be serious.
1 [Report This]Date: September 28, 2020 11:03 am Title: Grand Canyon
What a simple, wonderful, concise, amazing story. A 55 word snapshot of each season, each one as lovely to read as the last (maybe the third had a little sting). Hoping to find time to read the longer stories you have in my tour of the works of the local legends. Love these little ones to get a taste of what I have to look forward to.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am so glad you enjoyed them. These are some of my favorite little things that I’ve written and it means so much that people like them!
1 [Report This]Date: August 17, 2020 05:25 pm Title: Grand Canyon
Okay, wow, I came into this story expecting to laugh but I did NOT expect to cry. The Sandals, Scranton, and Grand Canyon ones especially killed me. "We had fun, though, right?" I think my heart exploded. I'm gonna need to take a moment to just appreciate how well you wrote these. Beautiful.
Author's Response: We had fun though! Ugh I was like "can I handle it if I make this the end of his last postcard?" It got me, too! Thank you so much, aly!
Date: August 16, 2020 12:15 pm Title: Grand Canyon
I love this last one.
Author's Response: Just gonna respond to this last one so you don't get 9 emails! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you liked it! I thought about having Holly sign her name on the Colorado one, but I envisioned it being written and mailed from the airport (is that even a thing? In my head, it is, lol) so it was done before he even found Holly at baggage claim!
1 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2020 09:05 am Title: Grand Canyon
This was lovely! You got so much out of those 55 words and the insights into so many different stages of Pam's life were great!
Author's Response: Thank you so much DG! I'm glad you liked it!
1 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2020 06:49 am Title: Grand Canyon
Pampelmousse??? So Michael!
Author's Response: I laughed out loud when I hit on Pampelmousse! I like to think Michael would be VERY into La Croix in an attempt to stay relevant!
1 [Report This]Date: August 14, 2020 01:19 pm Title: Grand Canyon
Very sweet. I loved every one. Great idea to do this :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Donna!
1 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2020 11:56 pm Title: Grand Canyon
I love this. A whole lot.
Somehow, in 55 words, the Vegas chapter had me tearing up.
This is truly a glimpse into the very best side of Michael. You showed the depth of his friendship with Pam grow, and gave us hints into her relationship with Jim all in so few words. An impressive feat.
Author's Response: Thank you, Jenna! You touched on everything that I hoped this story was and that makes me so happy. I’m so glad you liked it!
Author's Response: Thank you, Jenna! You touched on everything that I hoped this story was and that makes me so happy. I’m so glad you liked it!
1 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2020 07:40 pm Title: Grand Canyon
Considering how old his kids would be in that trip, I don't blame the kids.
Great job with all of these. Quick, short, but full of heart. Bravo!
Author's Response: I’m just gonna respond to this one to save my poor fingers, haha! Thank you so much! It seemed like the emotions I wanted to get across were reflected in your reviews, which I love. And I laughed out loud at your review for the Niagara one! Maybe she did toss that one...