1 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2021 12:42 am Title: Chapter 2
If you ever finish this, I'd love to read it.
1 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2020 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love Karen and Pam's talk here, although I felt like Karen's overconfidence that Jim would go back to her will come back to bite her - or I hope so. Here's hoping Jim doesn't go full hermit on them.
I love wishy-washy Jim bashing, looking forward to seeing how you decide to move forward with this!
1 [Report This]Date: August 31, 2020 04:18 am Title: Chapter 2
Ovaries before brovaries! I loved this chapter, I didn’t want it to end. Your Karen is very much Ann Perkins here & I adore her.
1 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2020 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, Pam and Karen were so, so brave and honest, even if their honesty could hurt themselves and other people. And they didn't blame each other, didn't look for excuses and so on... Love it!
Also, it was so lovely that Pam said 'I wish I was a bit like you' to Karen, and Karen called Pam courageous.
And that moment when Pam said she wasn't in love with who Jim had become... wow, I really like that. It feels like a bit like self-respect and... I don't know, a respectful love and not blind admiration. I'm into an idea that Pam and Jim must work out all the issues before having 'happily ever after,' I guess.
I'm full of anticipation about the next chapter. I have a feeling that there might be angry talks and backfiring, and tears... but Pam and Karen are going to be a team, and that means everything will be awesome!
Date: August 30, 2020 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
Good for Pam to have the courage to tell Karen the truth. Unlike wishy washy Jim. Great conversation between these two.
1 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2020 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yay! Title drop! I'm a sucker for using a title in a story...
Anyway, I really like this version of Karen. I like Pam too, but it's easy on this site to write good Pam stuff. It's much rarer to see good Karen stuff. Thanks for it.
1 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2020 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
This was great. I loved that Pam had the courage to tell all of this to Karen. I'm also impressed that Karen took the news so well. At this point in her relationship with Jim it doesn't seem to carry as much of the sting as it did in canon. I think it's also not as hard for Karen because she respects that Pam has the courage to tell her.
Absolutly wonderful bit of lady bonding. I had the same reaction as Karen when Pam said "sisters before misters." Great way to have Pam make that sentiment her own. And class it up a bit too.
Can't wait to see where this goes.