1 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2020 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ah hah! I knew this was familiar! Welcome, glad you could join us!
I feel like you really captured Pam's thought process well here, especially with the ring weighing her down. I know I said it back over on ffnet, but I like that you chose not to have them speak, I feel like it really serves your narrative well.
1 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2020 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes more! Yes to Pam telling Jim how she feels! Yes to no season of angst! Yes to all of that. It's been done a lot, but don't let that stop you. It's always fun to see how someone could view that situation.
This was a phenomenal look into Pam's mindset during all of this. The phone call with her Mom reinforcing all the thoughts she's having about Jim fit in so neatly. And of course her reaction to his kiss was excellent.
I would very much love to see where this goes because it feels like it has so much potential. Great job.