1 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2020 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 1: Smoke Before Flames
“Her shoulders ached from carrying the weight of the day on them” This is The Merger all over. Lovely description.
I really like this challenge - I look forward to seeing what you do with it. This is a really nice start!
Author's Response: Thank you!! :) Hopefully you enjoy what’s to come!
1 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2020 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 1: Smoke Before Flames
I love the premise of the apartment challenge, and I can't wait to see where you go with it. Pam's knowledge of her neighbors and her sharing some of it with Jim regardless of the cool persona he's giving her were quite endearing.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: September 05, 2020 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 1: Smoke Before Flames
I like the set up. You captured Pam's feelings of disappointment in Merger Day really well. Nice scene setting with the old apartment, fire alarms, and upstairs neighbor. This seems like it could get really interesting.
Author's Response: Thank you! I lived in a building in college that was prone to fire alarms, so that’s what inspired that plot. Haha
1 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2020 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 1: Smoke Before Flames
Oh, I love this prompt (not that I've ever written for it myself) so I'm so glad you took it up! I'm excited to see where you go with it!
Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully I don’t let you down! ;)