1 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2020 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 2: Sisters Know Best
Ah, I love a good busybody Larissa, and also Pam and Jim actually trying to be friends in Season 3.
1 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2020 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 2: Sisters Know Best
Oh, a Larissa appearance? Awesome. One of my favorite characters to play with. Really liked your take on her. And now the Karen card is out in the open ... Enjoying this a lot, keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you! I’ve never written her into a story and it was really fun to explore her instant friendship with Pam as well as her relationship with Jim. I really want her to make another cameo somewhere in the story. ;)
1 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2020 09:26 am Title: Chapter 2: Sisters Know Best
I liked this update a lot. I love that Pam is doing her best to overcome the distance between her and Jim. And using cookies too. After all the saying, "the way to a man's heart is through is stomach," is a thing for for a reason.
Lovely to have a Larissa sighting. Makes it a lot easier to help Pam's courage, especially there when Larissa tells Pam to not give up. Loved that.
Also really liked that Jim and Pam had a little moment there at the door. It felt very sweet. Interesting reaction when Karen calls. Jim seems apologetic to Pam and almost dismissive to Karen. Listing to the pull on those heartstrings Jim. And there Pam goes at the end. A nice subtle reminder to Jim that she's still there. Loved it.
1 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2020 08:58 am Title: Chapter 2: Sisters Know Best
I for one will not object to more chapters! The Pam and Larissa interactions were great, and I really liked how Larissa coerced an putting for them, as well as her parting words of encouragement. Great job there.