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Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 10, 2020 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 5: The Floodgates

That last line is killer. I mean, it's a cute update and I liked it, but it's not THAT unexpected (not that it should be), but I did not expect the last line so it really made me laugh.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2020 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 5: The Floodgates

At first this felt a little like Pam was backsliding. She's had all this courage to try and forge ahead with a friendship with Jim, she calls him out on his not talking to Karen, then she's the one to run away.

However I get it. Change takes time and there will often be a few steps backwards. However her being away did give Jim time to figure things out for himself as well.

Love that he shows up with the soup she likes. A very honest and heart-to-heart conversation. I really liked it. Took a little time, but when they're honest with each other the rewards are often so very worth it. The same was true here. Excellent job with getting all that out.

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