1 [Report This]Date: April 29, 2021 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 6: Playing Catch-up
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1 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2021 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 6: Playing Catch-up
First, I need to start with an apology. I read this when I was in the throes of reading as much as I could as fast as I could. I didn't leave any reviews; that's why I'm sorry. I now see the writers here as real people, not just binary code.
I like your fluff. You keep their back and forth at an age appropriate level. You also did an amazing job of getting sex in without ever fleshing out a sex scene. Good onya
1 [Report This]Date: January 14, 2021 11:38 am Title: Chapter 6: Playing Catch-up
Hi, me again. Back to tell you how wonderful you are. How wonderful this story is. How wonderful this chapter was. All of it. I have to say, though, that the peanut butter jar was my fave. The fact that she would go to Jim's to have him open jars for her, and then doing that causes her to run into Karen and eventually lead to the fight in the stairwell (which you *know* I love me a good fight in the stairwell), and then her seeing it on the counter and being upset because of the fight, and then after kissing, saying "I'm going to need you to open that jar of peanut butter on the counter." Kill me. Love love love love love. I'm gonna need a sequel to this one, too, thanks.
Date: September 12, 2020 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 6: Playing Catch-up
This is a very solid ending, and winningly fluffy.
1 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2020 12:00 am Title: Chapter 6: Playing Catch-up
Awww, such a cute and fluffy ending! I love to see them that happy and careless.
Thank you very much for the amazing story!
1 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2020 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 6: Playing Catch-up
Again, that's an excellent last line. I was kind of hoping Margaret was like "actually, I know who you are" but I do think your version is better. Thanks for sharing, this is a really fun story!
1 [Report This]Date: September 08, 2020 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 6: Playing Catch-up
Always lovely to get a scene like this. Hints of steam, good times with the family, and a nice tie in joke with the fire alarms to bring it full circle.
Great job with this story. It's been a lot of fun to read and explore.
Fortes Fortuan Adiuvat
Author's Response: As always, thank you for your reviews!! I like writing chapters like this after a few emotional angsty chapters. :) I’m glad you enjoyed reading the story!!