1 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2020 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story is so great. I finished chapter 35 and almost hate to read it now that it says finished. I dont want to be done with it. You did a great job with characterization. :)
Date: September 14, 2020 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
"There was no one in the world but her and Roy. She knew this as surely as she knew the earth revolves around the sun."
One thing I think you do a good job of throughout this fic is painting how isolating Roy's abuse is for Pam - and that starts right from the beginning.
1 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2020 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'll review in full at some point, but I'm thrilled you decided to bring this over (I was the one who left the link in the comments on FF.net).
Author's Response: Thank you so much xx
1 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2020 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
I’m so glad you decided to bring this to MTT. I loved seeing this story on FF, and I hope you’ll also upload the sequel here too.
1 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2020 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, okay that went dark quickly. There's a few abusive Roy fics on here. It's always an interesting tactic to take. That Roy being like this is the reason Pam stayed with him for so long.
Anyway, you could feel the dread in Pam's thoughts here. That she's to scared to do anything about her situation. That her only refuge is her time with Jim. Heartbreaking to read, but you wrote it very well.
Onto the next chapter.