1 [Report This]Date: October 29, 2020 09:14 pm Title: Jim
This is a great read with the dual perspectives. I'm eager to read what's next and really hope you continue.
1 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2020 12:19 pm Title: Jim
You convey the raw emotion and confusion in this chapter really well, I could really relate to Jim's disorientation and spinning there. I'll admit that I was a little confused at how Pam showed up so quickly, but I guess we can chalk that up to an unreliable narrator in this case! Well done, nervously looking forward to catching up with the rest!
1 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2020 03:34 am Title: Jim
This does not bode all that well... Lovely writing. You’ve built a whole lot of tension as to what’s wrong with Jim. I have my fingers crossed it’s nothing too terrifying...
Author's Response: I guess you’ll just have to keep reading and see!!
1 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2020 01:59 pm Title: Jim
Really happy you decided to bring this one over (I was the one who posted the review link) and looking forward to seeing where this story goes next.
Author's Response: Yes! Thank you so much for suggesting!
1 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2020 01:23 pm Title: Jim
Well that's dramatic. The paramedic in me is trying to figure out what's going on with Jim. Sudden abdominal pain, nausea, dizziness, my first thought is an internal bleed of some kind.
Looking forward to seeing where this goes.