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Reviewer: Anne-Rose Sweetkins Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2023 10:42 am Title: Chapter 2: The Art Room

Jim is already so far gone! I am surprised Dwight is not the agriculture teacher.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2020 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Art Room

This is some quality Jim/Pam banter, and you're doing a good job using elements of canon in creative ways. And the Raphael prank is too funny.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2020 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Art Room

Adorable. Love how Jim is constantly making up excuses to be near Pam. Feels very much like canon. Likewise with the teasing and banter they share. And a little mini-prank. Very sweet that this one with Pam as the target rather than Dwight is just kind of fun. Really loving their dynamic. You're doing a great job.

Author's Response: Thank you, Warrior!! I felt like this prank was more of a flirtation and a great way to ensure Jim some more interaction with Pam. But we aren’t done with the pranks, yet...

Reviewer: JHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2020 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Art Room

As a lover of TMNT as a child, that reference made my heart skip a beat. I love the prank, I love that he's being more forward, and I love that you're borrowing Jenna's style a bit for Pam's look--it's very very cute. I love this!

Author's Response: I don’t even think I meant to borrow Jenna’s style, but when I gave it a final read-through before posting I had the very same thought! Haha and side note, I made my own Raphael (the ninja turtle) costume for Halloween when I was in Jr. High. 😂

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2020 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Art Room

A Raphael poster is extremely lacking in my life now. I just, can’t tell you why...

Aw I loved their interactions here! I literally squeeled over “Just looking for an excuse to keep hanging out with you”

Can’t wait for her reaction to the TMNT photo too.
Yes, a BIG rookie mistake to keep your door open!

Great work WW, CANNOT wait for chapter 3

Author's Response: Aww, thank you!! I really am so happy you are liking it!! :) :)

Reviewer: beth9501 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2020 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Art Room

So sweet! I love this cute prank.

Author's Response: Thank you!! :)

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2020 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Art Room

*squeals loudly three times*

I’m so so so excited for this story, and this chapter was so good! I love how Jim is so forward here, although I’m curious if you’re going to add a Roy. I enjoyed Pam’s overalls as well. They reminded me of her Pratt sweatshirt and jeans look from S9.

I’m not giving you a jellybean because I want to space them out, but I LOVED this chapter so much!

Author's Response: Thank you!! I’m so happy you’re liking it! I guess you’ll have to wait and see if Roy shows up...

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