Reviews For The Letter
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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2021 11:25 am Title: Toby- A Fragile Hope

Whoa, VERY exciting twist here. And relatively believable of Toby, who just has a way of taking all the sympathy you should feel for him and crushing it to bits. Wildly creepy, there - and apparently his disgust at cheating doesn't go quite so far as changing his mind about Pam.

I'm wondering if this might come back to bite him, though, or at least not work - the camera crew obviously knows about the letter, and they're already discussing how they're struggling with watching the Jim and Pam situation go on without interfering. Feels like foreshadowing. Or maybe I'm just eager to see Toby get his comeuppance now.

Author's Response: Thank you for your feedback! We've not heard the last from the documentary crew or Toby, for sure!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2021 05:34 pm Title: Toby- A Fragile Hope

Holy crap! Did not see that coming. Wow Toby being a real dick here. Now we're all sorts of set up for any number of things to happen. I'd write more, but I'm still kind of in shock about everything.

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