Reviews For The Letter
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Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17, 2021 04:49 pm Title: Jim- One More Last Chance

Oh tortured Jim. Reeling from everything there and yet he still wants to hold onto hope. Great way to get into his thoughts. When I read the chapter title I thought he would head back upstairs and see the shredded letter and more angst would ensue. Though it remains to be seen if someone else sees that. And we still have to deal with the jerk that is Toby in this fic. Should be interesting to see where we go from here.

Author's Response: a86;a039;

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2021 12:15 pm Title: Jim- One More Last Chance

The bit in the parking lot, Jim sort of inventing this one last test and then pushing it back when she fails, desperate for some kind of sign... very real.

Author's Response: I could feel it in my bones; that crazy reasoning. 

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