1 [Report This]Date: February 10, 2021 03:29 am Title: Air XI
Oof, poor Pam. This captures the art show so well, it's so heart-breaking. And the 'little by little' really made me think of the way she gets more and more dejected as the night goes on and no one shows. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! That episode was painful to watch, but I'm glad that in the end, Pam got some recognition and a feeling of worthiness (plus the whole 'courage and honesty' thing, but that's a different tale).
Date: February 09, 2021 05:08 pm Title: Air XI
Oooof. This feels real for Pam at this point, that she might feel in that moment like she was fading. Thank goodness for Michael.
Author's Response: Yeah, that was one of a few moments when I genuinely liked Michael.
Thank you!
Date: February 09, 2021 04:50 pm Title: Air XI
I'll be honest, this is the first time I've gotten a little confused. Maybe I don't remember "Business School" right, but is the "he" here Jim or Micheal? Micheal would fit since he showed up and praised her work so much. Maybe that's just me.
Regardless, great look into how Pam might be feeling right now. Slowly fading into the background. Well done.
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