Date: February 24, 2021 03:55 am Title: Water XVI
Ooh this one’s interesting. I really like the way you’ve captured Pam knowing, deep down, that she’s not sure about Roy and feels a bit trapped - even though they’re practical and prepared for anything. And such a great contrast with when she does find out she’s pregnant with Jim and couldn’t be more overjoyed. Again, I’m just so impressed at how you manage to capture all of this is in so few words!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words <3
Having a child is such a life-changing thing, and if there's the slightest doubt in the partner, joy quickly turns into a nightmare... and Pam, not even realizing it, had a lot of doubts. Glad I was able to express that!
Date: February 23, 2021 10:23 am Title: Water XVI
An intriguing scenario, with Pam not quite in touch with WHY she's so worried and then so relieved. And with the single line, she doesn't have to analyze it too closely.
Reminds me a lot of this fic, which if you haven't read and are interested in the Pam/Roy pregnancy idea you definitely should: https://ficsbypunim.livejournal.com/4045.html
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Date: February 23, 2021 07:38 am Title: Water XVI
That was tense!
Season 3 was uncomfortable enough as it was without Pam having Roy’s devil spawn.
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Date: February 23, 2021 07:15 am Title: Water XVI
That's a very interesting take on what happened between S2 and S3. Brings up all kinds of what if type scenarios. However I can also feel her relief. Nice job.
Author's Response: Oh, the possibilities for different scenarios are endless (I'm not sure I want to explore them, though). However, in this story, I was rather thinking about earlier Pam/Roy times, not about the gap between 2 and 3 seasons... but this scenario also might've taken place.
Thank you for your review!