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Reviewer: beth9501 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2021 02:01 am Title: Chapter 3: The Library

The Bachelor references are incredibly entertaining! I can see Jim and Pam watching the show, Pam engrossed in it while Jim is grossed out. Pretty typical haha!

Then we have this hilarious Dwight and Angela scene of then in the library that I wasn't expecting. Too. Freaking. Funny.

Awesome update!!!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2021 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 3: The Library

Awwww, I'm glad Dwight and Angela managed to find each other here. And of course the sex handprint comes back into play! Pam calling out Jim was very funny.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2021 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 3: The Library

This is fun. I 100% believe Jim is the last one to know about Dwight and Angela. Such a great adaptation of canon and it' so much fun to have that moment between Jim and Pam. Likewise that he's still calling her Beesly. Another fun thing from canon that's always been sweet between them. Her reminding him of the sex handprint was the perfect callback.

Wonderful chapter. Thus far this is the kind of story I wish I could give a jellybean for each chapter. So I'm holding off this time because I'm sure there are moments to come, but there's no doubt this deserves many a jellybean.

Reviewer: lazyloris Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2021 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 3: The Library

This chapter was so funny! And Jim was definitely not very perceptive about certain things! I hope we get a chapter with Jim and co and the conference, that is one of my fave episodes because of all of the conferences I've worked over the years.

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2021 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 3: The Library

AAAAAAAAH! This was great, WW!
“Clandestine meetings” hmm....would those be followed by longing stares? Sorry, I had to.
SO reminiscent of both The Negotiation and Fun Run. I love their banter and, aaaah so cute!

I loved this chapter a lot!

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2021 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 3: The Library

Don’t you think it’s...unpleasant? I mean, Pam. They were making out in the library. Of our school. Dwight.”

“And Angela.”

This makes me crack up every time hahahhaahah i love it so much. Jim’s reaction to finding out about Dwight and Angela comes second tho to his reaction to Pam already knowing about them. Thats seriously so good. Also I love the callback to the sex handprint omg. Also protective jim, yes PLEASE. I cant wait to see how this conference goes!!

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2021 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 3: The Library

WW. I hate that that’s your name abbreviation because I can’t put it in all caps to indicate that I’m yelling. This. Was. So. Adorable!
I looooooved the callback to canon with Jim finding out about Dwight and Angela, and then being shocked that Pam already knew.
And then, of course: “She was his sun, moon, and stars, but now she was also growing something inside of her that they made together and he knew he would do anything to protect them both.”
HOLY CRAP, GIRLFRIEND. My heart is MELTING like the Wicked Witch of the West, except in a not scary way. You have such a way with these two in this setting, and it wouldn’t be a review from me if I didn’t say, “I don’t know how you do it.”

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