Date: May 10, 2021 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 11
I love Izzy in this - both her jumping straight to Dwight being the cute one (lol), and her needling of Pam. Also, the Deutschland uber alles of me line is amazing. And I love Pam watching Jim and being so totally enamoured of how funny he is, which is a nice echo of Jim's earlier thoughts on Pam.
Date: May 01, 2021 06:07 am Title: Chapter 11
It's sad a little that Pam't bubble's about to break, but I enjoyed immensely Pam and Izzy's interaction (even if one of Izzy's remarks made me want to wash my brain — I still can't get her attraction to Dwight, sorry...). And it's curious to watch where everything goes!
(I nearly wrote a pun containing the words 'Jim' and 'thirsty,' but then I thought that it might be too much, so I just say thank you for writing and express my hope that you'll update this lovely story soon!)
Author's Response: Thank you! Izzy + Dwight doesn't make sense to me either, but I am enjoying the concept of playing with that idea even so. And I would welcome your Jim/thirsty pun!
Date: April 30, 2021 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 11
Okay, I know Pam doesn't like it and I really do get why, but I love the energy Isabel's bringing to the table here. I very much look forward to seeing Dwight/Isabel play out, especially because this feels like it could open a lot of doors for Jim and Pam.
“I’d like him to get his Deutschland uber alles of me, if you know what I mean.” This is a character we do not know and this still feels perfectly in character.
Author's Response: Writing Izzy was a fun way to break my normal patterns--so thank you for the feedback on her. I'm really glad you liked her!
Date: April 30, 2021 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 11
So this one is funny, endearing, and "what the heck are you seeing there Izzy?" all at the same time. Still, all of Izzy's repartee in regards to Dwight was delightful to read.
Pam noticing everything subtle and obvious about Jim is and always will be delightful. Her back and forth with Izzy is also great in showing her natural wit, which is always great fun.
Author's Response: Thank you! I had a lot of fun with Izzy--and I will continue to in the next chapter.