Date: August 17, 2021 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 32
It’s a date!! I really enjoyed Pam actually continuing the conversation (after the rap on the counter 😍), and their inception chat was just lovely and dorky and very them. As was Jim saying she’s lovelier than a handbag. It’s so nice reading a happy Jam that can just enjoy having a crush on each other and starting to date, the giddiness here is very cute. I can’t wait for their first date!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you liked that! They get to have a nice date too!
Date: August 16, 2021 10:29 am Title: Chapter 32
Delightful as always. Really loved the line about the vampire trying to put on makeup. Especially with Dwight and Dwight's recent purchase. Just pure clever perfection there.
Jim and Pam remain great. Loved the inception banter and all the wonderfulness surrounding it. They are their delightful dorky selves and it's a joy to read. And their first date is to Cugino's! Nice way to add in some canon but with a re-imagined non angsty twist. Can't wait to see how it turns out.
Author's Response: Thanks very much. I like having some real oddness in the Dwight descriptions. And spoilers: the date will go well.
1 [Report This]Date: August 16, 2021 03:19 am Title: Chapter 32
I love this,
Author's Response: Thank you! That's really good to hear!
Date: August 15, 2021 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 32
There's just a lot of fun writing in this chapter. The vampire-doing-makeup image is funny and spot on and also strangely appropriate for Dwight, and Pam and Jim's Inception banter sounds just like them, and Pam accidentally getting SUPER corny and Jim loving it is ALSO very them and very adorable. Nice to see those crazy kids enjoying each other here!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I am glad the Inception-banter worked, I was a little worried.